We have had a lot of fun in the past with our script contests so we have decided to do it once again! Here is how it works:
Post your scripts in this thread on this forum. Please post only knock out (any style) scripts. You can post 1 or 2 stories. If you submit 2, please post them separately, not in the same post. Give each script a title, which you should enter in the subject line of your post. Two winners will be chosen – one by the judges and one by popular vote. The judges prize is a credit for $150 worth of Anton products and the popular vote prize is a credit for $100. These can be used to purchase any of our products on fetishvideos.us —dvds or digital content. Winners will be contacted by e mail.
We are holding a total of 4 contests—this one, one for bondage stories on DamselinDistress.net, one for superheroine stories on Superheroines.org and one for hypnosis stories on Stripnotized.com Each contest is separate. So, if you submit 2 scripts here, you can also submit scripts on the other sites. If your story involves more than one fetish—for example, superheroines in bondage—you can post the same story on two sites.
You must be a member of this site to submit a script and to vote. Membership is free.
Scripts must be posted here by April 30 to be eligible.
Voting by forum members will begin on May 1. Instructions on how to vote will be posted at that time. Voting will continue until May 10 and winners will be announced a few days after that.
Contest Guidelines
Please feel free to use your imagination when writing your script. But, keep in mind that the prize is for writing a great video script, not a screenplay for an epic Hollywood movie. So, it would be best if your story could be shot in a normal setting such as a house, a warehouse, a studio, a hotel room or an office. Of course, if your idea involves fantasy characters such as superheroines, you are welcome to have it set in a villains lair or at superheroine headquarters with the understanding that, if it were shot, it would just be shot in a studio. Your story should have no more than 5 female characters and 3 male characters.
Stories should not be shorter than 150 words and should not exceed 700 words.
All submissions become property of Anton Productions for future video production consideration.
We are looking forward to reading all your stories!
sounds like a good idea joe. one concern. if i submit a script that contains head ko's dragging scenes and the fmales dressed in low riding jeans and tops that show navel, how do i know ill get a fair judging as i think maybe the judges might be biased towards just chloro/ots carries/pantyhose, and dresses, and not consider other facets of the sleepy fetish..in other words, how do i know the ballot box won't be stuffed?
This is a story I wrote years ago. I wrote both a M/F and a F/F version.
Night Run (M/F)
It was 1:30 AM in the hospital. The supervisor, Farrah Reed, RN, was on her rounds, taking her usual shortcut through the older part of the complex. Once the original hospital, it now consisted of store rooms and offices. It was deserted at night.
Farrah, 27, was five-ten, well proportioned with layered red hair and green eyes. She was an Army veteran, in excellent physical condition. She wore a green scrubs with a white lab jacket. She had a stethoscope around her neck. She carried a clipboard with her paperwork.
She was in the middle of the old building. As she passed a storeroom, the door opened behind her. Her first warning was a hand over her mouth. Another hand wrapped itself around her waist. Farrah was strong, but her attacker easily pulled her into the storeroom.
While the hand remained clamped over her mouth, the other hand moved from her waist. Before she could make a move, she felt a sharp jab in her right thigh. A burning sensation followed. The arm returned to her waist. A gruff voice said: "There ya go. That'll quiet ya down, pretty one."
"Damn, what did he give me. How much time?" She moved quickly. A heel stomped down on the nearest foot. Her elbows buried themselves in her attacker's gut. He let out a sharp cry and she was free.
"Code 73, One West.... Code 73, One West..... Code 73, One West" came over the loudspeaker. Her pager went off. She already knew who was calling.
Farrah ran as fast as she could for the safety of the main hospital. She could hear footsteps behind her.
It came on her subtly. The corridor seemed to get gradually longer and longer. Her head seemed to slowly fill with cotton. Things began to lose focus. She lost track of what she was doing.
She was about ten feet from the safety when she stopped. She was so tired, so relaxed. She tried to remember why she was running. She didn't really care.
"There you are. I was worried. Come on, I'll take you someplace safe." The man wrapped his arm around her, and walked her back the way she had come. She felt perfectly safe. She leaned her head on his shoulder. Soon she'd be able to sleep.
He took her to an old exam room. It still had the exam table. He coaxed her to sit down. She was so tired, it didn't take much coaxing. He put her feet up. "How nice of him, now I can get some sleep", she thought.
He watched her as she fell asleep. She was so beautiful. He had wanted her since he had first set eyes on her. Now she was all his. His to do whatever he wanted . And he wanted to do a lot.
He bent over and gave her a deep kiss. His hands explored her body. She sighed, but mad no effort to move. He unbuttoned her lab coat, pulled up her scrub top. Undoing the bra underneath, he gasped as the work of natural beauty before him. He pulled down her scrub bottoms, and worked off her panties. Then he stepped back, surveying the scene. “What an awe inspiring beauty,” he thought. He walked toward her.
Fortunately everybody knew Farrah's routine. When she didn't answer her page, they started looking for her. She wasn't on any of the units. The old hospital seemed a good place to start.
Two aides interrupted her attacker as he was climbing onto the table. The man screamed: "She's mine!!! You can't have her. After a struggle, they had him pinned on the floor. Before long, more help arrived, and the patient was returned to One West, the locked Psych unit.
Farrah was taken to the ED. A few days to recover and she was back on the job.
female #1 undercover cop dressed in jeans, tanktop, and jeans jacket slips into the house and then makes a phone call..'im in, gonna look for the black book' then hangs up. while searching a drawer of a hutch, she does not notice a thug, dressed in black with ski mask, sneaking up from behind and knocks her out with a black jack to the head. thug searches her, finding her gun and ID. thug gets out a cellpohone, making a call, 'we got company' then hangs up and drags her to a doorway leading to a bedroom..
female cop comes to tied up, her tanktop ridden up revealing her belly button, as she struggles to get loose. after some time she gets loose and moves towards the doorway to leave the bedroom and hears a noise out in the other room.
female cop spots the 'thug' who has been ransacking the room, and finds the 'black book.' female cop sneaks up behind the thug and knocks her out with a karate chop across her neck..picks up the black book and then takes off the ski mask..eyes widen when she sees it is her female partner.
as the female cop takes the cellphone on the desk to start to make a call, she is chloroformed from behind by a male...and the black book is retrieved. the first 'thug' comes to and smiles seeing her partner. they proceed to tie up the female cop and then two person carry her out of the house.
Here's my entry for the contest. The script calls for a costume party for the girls to attend, but it could just as easily be a night clubbing, in which case they could be wearing club wear instead of costumes.
Title: Girls’ Night Out
Cast: -- Henry: young man, dressed casually
-- Jane: an attractive young woman dressed in a sexy costume (nurse, French maid, etc.)
-- Lindsey: another attractive young woman dressed in a sexy costume as well
Setting: House or Apartment
Story: Henry, Jane, and Lindsey are all roommates, sharing a house (or apartment) together. Jane and Lindsey view Henry in a purely platonic way, but he has other feelings towards them.
It is evening. Jane and Lindsey are getting ready to go to a costume party (can be a Halloween party, but doesn’t have to be). Each has picked out a sexy costume, and is preparing for a night out on the town. The movie opens with a shot of Jane and Lindsey talking in the living room. They mention Henry, and laugh a little about how he’s kind of a nerd, but at least pays his share of the rent on time. Then they talk about how excited they are to go to the costume party, and possibly meet some guys. Little known to them, we see a shot of Henry listening in to their conversation, hidden out of sight around a doorway.
The girls head upstairs to change into their costumes. Jane comes down first. She meets Henry, and does a little twirl, asking him what he thinks of her outfit. We see the unrestrained lust in his eyes as he tells her it looks good. She sits down on the couch, waiting for Lindsey, and asks Henry if he can get her a glass of water.
Henry dutifully disappears into the kitchen, pouring a glass of water and, of course, dropping in a few knockout drops to put Jane to sleep. He brings it back out to her, and she starts to drink it, making casual conversation with her roommate. Soon her words get slurred, her eyes heavy and blinking. Henry asks her if she’s feeling all right. She responds that she feels a little dizzy, and tries to stand. Henry leaps up and takes her gently, settling her back down on the couch. By this time Jane is totally out of it, giggling and sleepy-happy. Henry begins fondling her even before she is all the way out, telling her that he has wanted this for a long time, and that she won’t remember any of it. Jane finally drifts off to sleep with a soft whimper, her body limp and helpless on the couch. Henry begins to fondle her, then hears Lindsey coming down the stairs.
Cursing, Henry runs to the kitchen, where he pulls out a bottle of chloroform, wetting a cloth with it. Lindsey comes into the living room in full costume, running over to Jane to try to see what’s wrong. Henry appears behind her, and slaps the cloth over her face. She struggles, but in vain, her kicks and gyrating slowing as her eyes grow heavier and heavier. He shushes her, telling her that he won’t hurt her, but just wants her to sleep for a while. She won’t remember a thing, he promises her, and he’ll be extra gentle with her. He fondles her beautiful breasts even as she slides down to the floor, the chloroform finally claiming victory.
Henry grabs Lindsey, taking her up to the bedroom and laying her on the bed, undressing her. Once she is naked, he fondles her luscious body, spreading her legs and enjoying the sight of her exposed womanhood. She starts to stir, and he pins her down, reapplying the cloth and pinning her naked body to the bed until she falls back asleep.
Meanwhile back downstairs Lindsey starts to stir as well, standing shakily to her feet and wandering groggily to the door. Confused and disoriented, she struggles with the lock, right before Henry comes up behind her, telling her she can’t leave yet, and that she needs to go back to bed. She struggles weakly as he chloroforms her, holding her until she finally slumps down in his arms. Once she’s out he takes her back upstairs, laying her down next to Jane and undressing her as well. Once both girls are naked he fondles both their bodies for a bit, slapping their buttocks and spreading their legs. Finally he pulls out a syringe, giving each of them a quick jab in the buttocks as he explains that the drug will make sure that when they wake up in the morning the two beauties won’t remember a thing.
Henry gets onto the bed between both sleeping girls, putting his arms around both of them and smiling as he says he’s looking forward to a fun night with both of them. The scene fades out….
…And fades back in at the breakfast table the next morning. Henry is drinking coffee and reading the newspaper. Both girls stagger in, scantily dressed in pajamas and night shirts. He asks them how their night out was. Both respond that they can’t remember any of it, and that they have horrible hangovers. Henry remarks that they must had a lot to drink. They agree, and talk about going out again that evening as well.
The last shot is one of Henry, who tells them both with a smile, “I think you girls definitely deserve another night out.”
These 3 parts could be consecutive chapters on a 60-70 minute DVD, and /or be sold separately as 20 minute download segments.
Background:
Loren Chance has a very successful on line lingerie business. In Part 1 she interviews and takes advantage of Charlie Laine, her newest model. In part 2 her incompetent order taker and office aid Mary Jane Green is about to be fired. Mary Jane agrees to do a private sleepy audition with Loren in a desperate attempt to keep her job. In Part 3 Charlie, having passed her sleepy audition, is there for her first actual day on the job. Loren puts Charlie under and uses her for various sleepy poses. Then she catches Mary Jane peeking in the doorway at the session and not doing her work. Mary Jane is brought into the shoot for discipline. When Charlie wakes up, she is ordered to put Mary Jane under and play with her limp body for Loren’s camera. Eventually Loren gets overheated watching and puts Charlie under as well and plays with both of them.
General info:
Each of the segments can be shot in an ordinary apartment. A computer desk and workstation for Mary Jane to be working at, a door for Charlie to come in from and a bedroom with a camera and tripod set up is all that will be needed prop wise. There will be some sexy underwear of course and a chloroform bottle and a cloth. Also a small glass of water and a couple of small red candies to look like a roofies (Rohypnol) will be used in several scenes. A white dust mask with an elastic band will also be required. You might want to modify the mask to make it a little smaller so that it only covers the girl’s nose and mouth. Oh yes, you will need an eyedropper too.
Part 1 “Charlie’s Interview”
Charlie is seen ringing a doorbell with a modeling magazine in her hand. Her street outfit is a denim or leather mini skirt, dark pantyhose, and brown leather (just below the knee) boots that have side zippers. She is let in by Mary Jane and Loren is called. Mary Jane must be dressed to look very hot and cloth worthy here. Loren leads Charlie to the bedroom and has her sit on the edge of the bed.
Charlie says that Loren’s ad states that models can make from $100-$500 per hour depending on the assignment. Loren tells her that it is true. She asks what the rates were based on. Loren tells her that straight modeling pays $100. Sleepy modeling pays from $200-$500. She says that she will do whatever it takes to get the $500. Loren tells her that men like to see sleepy girls in nightgowns and underwear. Then she hands Charlie a roofie and some water. This will start her at $200. After she takes the pill, Loren has her slowly undress. Charlie starts with her boots and then her skirt and blouse are tossed aside. Charlie is starting to get sleepy now, and Loren starts slipping Charlie’s pantyhose off for her, since she is too sleepy to do it herself. Charlie asks in a sexy wavering voice how she can get the full $500. Loren tells her that she would have to put her all the way under for that. Charlie sleepily says “OK,” and Loren pours some chloroform on the cloth and sits down beside Charlie and gently puts her arm around her. As Loren holds the cloth gently over Charlie’s nose and mouth, she tells her to breathe normally and to relax.
Charlie complies, and slips under in about 20 seconds as her beautiful head falls delightfully limp in Loren’s hands. Loren holds the cloth there for an additional 10-15 seconds to assure that Charlie is deeply under for the inspection part of the audition. Then Loren slips Charlie’s bra straps off her shoulders and unhooks her bra. Once it is off, she admires Charlie’s breasts. Then she places Charlie on her back on the bed and slowly slips off her panties. .
Now Loren’s rigorous inspection and fondling of Charlie begins. She starts with sniffing the essence of Charlie’s hair. Then she pulls Charlie’s already partly open mouth, all the way open and explores and probes deeply inside it. Loren works her way down tasting Charlie’s nipples and spreading her legs and sampling her everywhere. Then Loren proceeds down Charlie’s legs to her feet. Once Charlie has been examined and sampled all over, Loren starts shooting some nude shots. She moves Charlie’s limp body into various positions for this. This beautiful limp and helpless body is a valuable item that Loren now totally owns and controls!
When Charlie wakes up, Loren hands her a sheer nightie and a pair of thigh high stockings. Once Charlie has put these on, Loren has her move around in various poses on the bed as she takes pictures. Then Loren offers Charlie a bonus. In addition to the $500 that she has already earned, Charlie could get a bonus for a special strip tease.
Loren picks up the dust mask and puts chloroform on it. Then she slips the mask on Charlie and asks her to do a slow strip tease. Loren then offers Charlie an extra $300 if she can get everything off before she passes out.
Loren watches as Charlie slips the nightie over her head and tosses it aside. Then Charlie slowly peels off the first stocking. When Charlie reaches for the second stocking, Loren smiles because she knows Charlie isn’t going to make the extra $300. As Charlie starts to pull the second stocking down, her eyes are in rapid flutter. Charlie passes out on the bed with the second stocking at her knee. Loren pulls it off gently for her and strokes her nude body. Then she says “Don’t worry baby, you’ve still got the job.” Loren whispers “Sweet dreams” in Charlie’s ear and gives her a kiss on the cheek. Then fade out. “To be continued…”
Background: Mary Jane is a screw up and has messed up orders and lost Loren a few accounts. That is not what this is about though. Loren has always had the hots for her and wants desperately to get her asleep and undressed. No money offers have made that happen. Loren finally threatens her job to get what she wants.
We open with Loren firing Mary Jane for messing up an important order. She begs to keep her job. Loren asks her to audition as a model, but she says that she won’t undress or model underwear. This won’t do. Finally she agrees to do a sleepy session with her clothes on. Loren doesn’t promise it will save her job, but agrees to give it a try.
Once in the bedroom Loren gives Mary Jane a roofie. Then Loren tries to take Mary Jane’s boots off. She refuses to let Loren take them off and Loren is frustrated. Mary Jane also refuses to model a nightgown for Loren.
The pill works quickly though, and Mary Jane is getting dreamy and amorous. She starts to get cozy and affectionate with Loren, but she still refuses to take anything off. Loren asks her if she would be willing to let her put something on her. She says Loren can put anything she wants on her!
Loren smiles and picks up the dust mask and puts chloroform in it. Smiling, she carefully straps it on Mary Jane. Mary Jane comments that it smells sweet, but strong. Then she says it is making her dizzy. Loren sits down beside her and places her arm around her. Mary Jane’s eyes are in rapid flutter now. Loren smiles as Mary Jane passes out and her sleepy head goes delightfully limp on Loren’s shoulder.
Finally Loren has her prize! She places Mary Jane on her back on the bed, and starts unzipping her boots and slowly slips them off. She can’t wait to get to get her hands on those lovely nylon encased legs and feet. She moves Mary Jane’s limp body around and waves her lovely legs all over. She also kisses and caresses her stocking feet. All the while the chloroform soaked mask is still on, causing Mary Jane to put herself more deeply under with every breath!
Finally Loren takes her mask off, but she binds Mary Jane’s hands behind her back and ties her ankles together before she wakes up. When she wakes up, Mary Jane is groggy, but quickly demands that Loren untie her. Loren picks up the chloroform bottle and heavily soaks the cloth. Mary Jane asks what Loren is doing. Loren tells her that her blouse looks awfully tight on her and she intends to loosen a few buttons. Mary Jane yells “No!” and starts thrashing around.
Loren gives us an evil smile as she applies the cloth. Mary Jane umps and struggles like a wildcat. She is bound though, and her struggle is fruitless and only serves to make Loren hotter! Mary Jane slips under in about 30 seconds. Loren holds the cloth on her after she is out, since she isn’t one who takes chances.
Now Loren starts to loosen that blouse. Every button will be undone before it is loose enough to suit her. Loren also unhooks and unzips her skirt as well. Loren reaches inside and fondles her boobs, without showing us anything of her flesh yet. Mary Jane is helpless and under Loren’s control, but even though everything is undone, she is still fully dressed from a practical point.
Mary Jane wakes up and is furious that she is undone. Loren holds up a red teddy and a pair of high heeled black patent pumps. Loren tells her that it will be her new work uniform if she is going to continue to keep her job. Mary Jane says that she won’t put it on. Loren tells her that she will put it on for her. Loren soaks the cloth again and tells her “Don’t worry, you won’t feel a thing.” Then she puts her under again. Mary Jane struggles, but is pretty weak now.
Loren strips her completely and tosses all her clothes on the floor. Then Loren removes most of her own clothes and enjoys Mary Jane’s limp and nude body. When Mary Jane wakes up, she is in the teddy and the pumps. Loren orders her to get back to work, if she wants her job.
She jumps off the bed and runs to her workstation. Later Loren asks her if she would like to earn a raise. Mary Jane says yes, as long as she doesn’t lose any more clothing. Loren tells her not to worry, and that you will actually giving her something else to wear. Mary Jane complains about being knocked out again. Loren tells her she must comply if she wants the raise. Loren puts the dust mask on her as she works and put a few drops of chloroform on it with an eye dropper.
Mary Jane works, ignoring her, as Loren continually adds a few drops at a time to the mask. Mary Jane gets deliciously sleepy and struggles to keep working. After a while, Mary Jane says that she can’t work now because everything is out of focus. Loren tells her it is time for her to rest anyway. Then Loren empties the entire dropper full on the mask. Mary Jane passes out nearly instantly, and slumps over the computer. Loren leaves the mask on her and carries her to the bedroom and places her on the bed.
Loren slowly slips her pumps off and tosses them on the floor. Then we fade to black as Loren begins to have her way with her again….
Part 3 Charlie’s Sleepy Shoot
Charlie arrives at the door and Mary Jane gets up from her workstation in the red teddy and black high heels as before. She lets Charlie in and leads her to the bedroom. Mary Jane then pretends to go back to work, but she doesn’t. She stays outside the door watching.
Charlie says that she desperately needs the $500 per hour today. Loren tells her not to worry and gives her a roofie right away. Then Loren sits on the edge of the bed and helps Charlie unzip and pull her boots off. Charlie hasn’t had anything to eat and the pill hits her hard and fast. By the time her second boot is off, she is lightheaded and swooning.
Loren loves this rapid sleepiness, and holds her up and undresses her slowly. Charlie is very amorous also, and is kissing Loren and thanking her for giving her the job. After Loren removes Charlie’s bra, she lets go of her and lets her fall on her back on the bed in her pantyhose and panties. Charlie is nearly out. Loren slips off her pantyhose and watches Charlie’s glazed and loving eyes stare at the ceiling.
Loren starts to remove Charlie’s panties, but she suddenly stops. Loren decides that she wants Charlie all the way under for that. Loren puts just a little chloroform on the cloth and Charlie slips under quickly. Then Loren tosses the cloth aside and removes Charlie’s panties. Loren has her way with Charlie for a few minutes before she puts a nightgown on her. Then once the gown is on her, she moves Charlie’s limp body around and takes sleepy shots.
When Loren changes camera angles, she catches Mary Jane in the doorway and orders her to come into the room. Mary Jane apologizes but admits that she was dying to see Loren put Charlie to sleep. Mary Jane tries to go back to work, but Loren tells her not to bother since she will now be working in this room for a while instead!
Loren tells Mary Jane that if she wants to watch Charlie be put to sleep, she will have to be put to sleep herself as well. To Loren’s amazement she agrees! When Charlie wakes up, Loren hands Charlie a well soaked cloth and tells her to wrestle with Mary Jane and put her under by force as Loren takes pictures. Charlie easily subdues Mary Jane and puts her deeply under. Then Charlie lifts Mary Jane’s limp legs and slips off her pumps.
When Mary Jane wakes up she puts her pumps back on. Then she is told she must put Charlie to sleep. Mary Jane is delighted to put Charlie under, but they don’t wrestle this time. It is erotic and consensual. After Charlie is deeply under, Mary Jane lifts Charlie’s nightgown up and explores her everywhere. She is just as much into limp body play as Loren is it seems…
Once Charlie is awake again, Loren has Mary Jane lie on the bed and puts her under with the cloth. Charlie watches getting very hot. Now Loren pours some chloroform into the dust mask and straps it on Charlie. Then Loren tells her to strip Mary Jane as far as she can before she passes out. Charlie lingers a little too long while slipping Mary Jane’s shoes off and as a result she is only able to hike Mary Jane’s nightgown so far up before she collapses on her. Then Loren lifts the limp Charlie off of Mary Jane and starts having her way with both girls. Loren poses them like dolls and takes pictures until fade out.
David's girlfriend Torrie was an actress. He took good care of her, and she was great to him. One evening while he was rubbing her feet on the couch, she told him of her perfect sexual encounter. It involved candles, dancing, soft music, and him wearing a zorro mask. "Don't laugh at that!" she told him. He didn't, and they had a wonderful evening.
A few nights later, back on the couch, Torrie was recounting that great night during another foot massage. "I think it is great how you didn't judge me and just did what you knew would turn me on" she said. "What is your fantasy?" she wanted to know.
David seized the opportunity. "I want to watch you sleep" he told her. "Actually, it is a bit more involved than that, but that is the basic premise." "That is so sweet" she replied.
David didn't want to mislead her and went into more detail about holding and carrying and playing with her limp body. "The things I want to do would wake you up for sure." "I think you are forgetting what I do for a living" she told him. "I can be the most convincing unconscious person you have ever seen" she bragged. "Watch this."
With that, Torrie stood up and launched into the most theatrical faint ever seen. Complete with the eye rolling, sighing, and moaning. She flopped back on the couch, and bounced forward. Slowly sliding to the floor. Just as she came to rest, leaning backward on the couch, Torrie looked at David and said "my body is yours". And then out she went. Her head leaned back and her mouth was wide open.
David was frozen. Just staring at her. She shot up, kissed him passionately, and said "is that all you've got? Take me, I am yours." Then, she passed out again.
Torrie put on quite a show. David held her, stripped her, kissed her, carried her, and all the while she put up no resistance. She never broke character and gave an amazing performance. She was like a ragdoll in his arms. And she loved every minute of it. So did he. They had a new game.
I thought of this a couple of years ago. It's not your typical drugged drink scenario since it has an unsuspected role reversal. It can be shot in a standard apartment. While military uniform not essential, I'd like to explore this under developed area. I hope you like it.
The video opens with Model One talking on the phone in her apartment to her contact. She is wearing a nice dress, hose and pumps. We can only hear her side of the conversation:
"I've been working in that office for the past 6 weeks. I've looked everywhere, its not there.....pause....I've set it up for the commander (rank solely based on available uniform) and I to have dinner following the embassy reception.....pause....I've seen Vic at some other functions, trust me, our commander is a light weight. Besides, once we get back here I'll use those pills you gave me.....pause....what should I look for.....pause...uninhibited, suggestible, like drinking 3 martini's.....pause...It should be pretty simple. I've noticed Vic checking out my legs....pause....Probably......pause....I'll manage to set a mood, maybe dangle a heal while we wait for my phantom boyfriend to pick us up and the drug to kick in. That reminds me, How long for it to work.....OK, in that case call at 7:00. I'll say that my boyfriend is running late....pause.......Yea, the cameras are in place. If I can't seduce it out of Vic, we should have enough to blackmail our good commander for the info......pause....From what you say, that drug should have Vic out like a light. Pick me up at 9:00.....Ok, I'd better get ready. I have to walk to the embassy."
One hangs up the phone and goes to the bar where she proceeds to set up an ice bucket with a bottle of champagne. After setting two glasses out, she pulls a pill bottle from the midst of a group of liqueur bottles and places a tablet in one of the glasses, then thinking about it she puts a second in saying "After 6 martini's Vic should be willing to say about anything." FADE OUT
Next scene: We see the front door to the apartment open and in walks One followed by the commander "Victoria Barnes". She is in standard uniform with tan hose and black pumps. If its summer whites then white pumps. Vic mentions that even though her feet are bothering her from all the standing at the reception, she is glad that they walked since she needed the fresh air to clear her head from the two glasses of champagne. They walk around the apartment a bit. As One pauses at various locations, she leans against things and does some heel popping. We notice Vic checking the shoeplay out. Then One says that they might as well relax until the boyfriend picks them up, showing Vic to the sofa. Vic warily accepts the offer of a glass of champagne, noting that she has already had two glasses. One just walks over, opens the bottle and pours into the prearranged glasses. In the interim, we see the commander sitting on the sofa crossing her legs, looking a little pensive. She starts twisting the ankle of the crossed leg, the heal of the pump sliding down the foot, on the verge of a dangle. As One is about to sit down, there is a knock at the door. One is a bit surprised but has little choice in answering since the commander is expecting a boyfriend to arrive. She hands Vic the mickied glass, leaving hers on the coffee table, and leaves the shot. We hear One answer the door and start to talk to someone. Vic starts to dangle her pump. As Vic is about to sip from her glass, she gives a giggle, realizing that her pump has fallen off her foot. As she bends down to retrieve it, she distractedly puts her glass down on the table, behind Ones glass. Vic slips her shoe back on, recrossing her leg in the opposite direction. She picks up a glass (the wrong one-effectively switching them) and takes a sip. Eventually One returns saying something about neighbors, and seeing that Vic is finishing her glass, picks up the drugged glass and offers a toast, downing its contents, encouraging Vic to do likewise. Vic does and One quickly takes her glass for refills. Just then the phone rings and One answers playing the "my boyfriend will be late" game. While One is on the phone, Vic again starts her shoeplay game, loosening a few buttons on her uniform and looking a bit warm and tipsy. One returns with the bottle and glasses explaining that since the boyfriend will be late, they might as well relax and enjoy the bottle. One stretches her legs and starts her flirtation, not realizing that she is the one about to succumb. Given the Commanders susceptibility and Ones drugging, you can imagine how things unfold. One has no idea that she is getting more and more forward, uninhibited, and suggestible. She 'accidently' bumps Vic's dangling pump, causing it to fall to the floor. Ones quickly follows, theres some giggling as both get really tipsy. A little footsie.......It turns out that the Commander is a lesbian but has hidden it because she is military. However, with all the champagne, she gradually lets the cat out of the bag. One tries to get the information, but loses control and just gets carried away in the moment and the commanders pent up lust.
Eventually, with the bottle finished, the two pass out on the sofa. As they do, we hear knocking on the door. One mutters something about her contact, but is too far gone to answer and we fade out.
This is my second entry for the contest. As you can see, I have made some different suggestions based on what props/settings are available. The names of the characters, like my first story, are intended to be generic and therefore able to be filled by whatever specific people are available to play the roles.
Title: My Three Spies
Setting: Hotel room or House
Characters:
John -- a young man dressed casually
Three Female Spies (Sara, Tina, and Karen)-- Female spies all dressed in provocative dark clothing (black or red mini-skirts, dark leather, latex, bodysuits, fishnet stockings, etc.)
Scene 1: Exterior setting of some sort (inside car, hotel hallway, outside house or hotel, etc.) The three girls are talking. They briefly discuss how Sara will go inside to knock John out, using truth serum to get a top secret code out of him, then kill him once she‘s done. The other two girls agree to wait outside until she is finished.
Scene 2: Inside house or hotel room. John is getting ready for a shower. He walks into the bathroom, starts up the shower, then heads out into the main room. Suddenly a sound alerts him that someone is coming. He ducks into hiding.
Sara enters the room. Hearing the shower, she advances on the bathroom, thinking John is inside. Thinking quickly, John grabs a heavy object and quietly follows her. At the door to the bathroom Sara wets the cloth with chloroform, then sneaks into the bathroom itself. Creeping towards the shower, she pulls back the curtain, only to reveal…nothing. For a moment she is surprised, and then we see John loom up behind her, giving her a solid crack on the head with the object in his hand. With a soft sigh Sara collapses back unconscious into John’s waiting arms. Surprised but thinking quickly, John drags Sara out of the bathroom, flopping her down onto the bed. He briefly rummages through her effects, and finds the chloroform-soaked rag, the syringe filled with truth serum, and a small spray canister (or tazer). (If using a bed with an appropriate headpost, handcuffs are discovered as well.)
Deciding to search Sara further for weapons, John removes her clothes until she is entirely naked. By the time he is taking off her bra and panties, it is obvious he is enjoying his strip search far too much, and he fondles the girl freely. Sara occasionally gives a soft whimper or a sleepy sigh, but does not awaken. (If he found them, John handcuffs the sleeping spy to the bed’s headpost).
As Sara starts to slowly wake up, groggy and confused, John decides to use the truth serum on her. He turns her on her side, injecting her in her buttocks, then rolls her back over. The effects are instant and obvious -- Sara becomes dreamy and very sleepy, a bit happy and giggly with her eyes half closed. John questions the girl, learning why she came and that there are others back outside. Finally he decides to put her back to sleep, and puts the chloroform cloth over her mouth. She doesn’t struggle, but breathes in deeply, her breasts rising and falling and her eyes slowly closing all the way until she is fast asleep once more.
Scene 3: Back outside, Karen and Tina are getting impatient. They agree to send Tina inside to figure out what’s going on.
Scene 4: Back inside, John has realized that more assassins are coming. He re-wets the cloth, hiding just as Tina sneaks into the room/house. She spots Sara a moment before John leaps out from hiding, grabbing her and slapping the chloroform cloth over her face. She struggles valiantly, but John keeps a tight grip, shushing her and urging her to go to sleep. Finally the fumes prove too much, and she slowly slides down in his arms, her eyes closing in defeat. He pulls her to the bed, laying her beside Sara and undressing her as well. Sara begins to come round again, but John gives her another taste of the chloroform and she slides happily back to dreamland. His wandering hands get the better of him, and he soon starts playing with both girls.
Scene 5: Back outside, Karen is worried something has gone wrong. She pulls out a gun and heads inside herself.
Scene 6: John is so absorbed with the unconscious girls on the bed he fails to notice Karen come in behind him. She points her gun, telling him to freeze or she’ll shoot. John raises his hands, his back to the assassin. In one hand he holds (out of Karen’s sight) the spray canister (or tazer, if preferred). Karen comes closer, telling John that he’ll pay for what he did to her friends, and that she intends to get the code from him. She tells him to turn around. He does, and quickly lets her have it (either spraying her in the face or zapping her with the tazer).
Karen crumples into John’s arms, and he lays her on the bed by the other two girls, doing a full body search of her as well that involves taking off all her clothes. Finally he decides he needs to send the girls to dreamland for good, and scrounges up three dust masks (if in a hotel, he finds them on either Karen or Sara). As he pours the chloroform on the masks, Tina starts to wake up. John puts the mask on her just in time, and she drifts back into a quiet slumber. He masks all three girls, giving their bodies one last final fondle, then gets up to leave.
If the setting is a house, John uses a cell phone to call his people to come and pick up the three slumbering assassins. If in a hotel, he bids them all sweet dreams, telling them better luck next time just before walking out the door.
Either way, the closing shot is of all three naked girls on the bed, sleeping peacefully.
